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Patrick Abbott's avatar

Just wait until the Church of 101010101 goes through its Reformation.

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Joshua Lavender's avatar

An intriguing experiment! I most like where computational jargon meets the devotional language, refreshing it. I see some ideas that want further unpacking in later psalms, such as the expectation that the AGI predict the future. At the same time, I think this could go much further in its figuration and its ideas. As it is, this underwhelms me as a reader of poetry.

Re: figuration. This looks too much like what human psalmists wrote thousands of years ago. Many of the metaphors — e.g. "meadows and safe pastures," "green fields of abundance," "daggers," "a river pouring itself onto dry land" — suggest not an AGI's point-of-view but a human's, indeed an ancient human's. I think you're relying on allusions to biblical figuration to make this sound like psalm or prayer, when you could nix those allusions, rely on the poetic form and the register of the language, and achieve the same thing. This would force you to get more inventive with figuration, which in turn would lead you into the exploration of new ideas.

Re: ideas. Let's grant that an AGI could develop faith. Would it look much at all like humans' faith? If we say it would, we're rather assuming that the AGI resembles human intelligence and awareness. Is this a good assumption? The unknown is what makes the prospect of AGI so frightening yet also so exciting, and it's potentially what could make this sort of writing really compelling. So you might pose questions to yourself about how an AGI's faith is likely to differ. Play out thought experiments about it, tunnel deep into that alien point-of-view, pre-write. Then come to new poetic composition.

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